Atkins Sample AP Scoring Activity Part 2

 Link to artworks: https://apcentral.collegeboard.org/pdf/ap-art-and-design-drawing-2020-sustained-investigation-sample-5-score-1233.pdf

Inquiry- 1

Her SI theme is too complex and has too many ideas. She talks about eyes, the view of society, bugs, and her personal experiences and never relates any of these ideas. 

Practice, Experimentation, and Revision- 3

She says she used graphite because she wanted to get more comfortable with it. You can tell that she is really improving using the medium, and her eyes get more and more detailed and dramatic.

Materials, Processes, and Ideas- 2

As I said in the Inquiry, it is hard to tell that some of her pieces are related. It is obvious for the works that all include an eye, but the viewer still doesn't get how that idea is related to the folk tales she was told as a child. 

2D Drawing Skills-3

It is obvious the student is very advanced in drawing. She includes very dramatic shading to bring the eyes to life, and all of her works look 3D.