I agree with Joe's comment, Marissa-similar to how you changed the scale and included overlaps with your "bubbles" dog pastel from way back in August, you could really begin to push a sense of depth and space if you shifted the scale if the clouds. You may have wanted a "flatter" appearance on purpose, but since they are so fluffy and textured I find myself seeking out a relational scale or distance/depth among and between the elements. Excellent use of color and repetition as design principles in this work!
I love the repetition of the clouds , and did you use oil pastels? I just wish it was full of clouds from big to small, with them over layering.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Joe's comment, Marissa-similar to how you changed the scale and included overlaps with your "bubbles" dog pastel from way back in August, you could really begin to push a sense of depth and space if you shifted the scale if the clouds. You may have wanted a "flatter" appearance on purpose, but since they are so fluffy and textured I find myself seeking out a relational scale or distance/depth among and between the elements. Excellent use of color and repetition as design principles in this work!
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